tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8266474991466818082.post4011873570157395780..comments2023-08-03T10:26:53.136-04:00Comments on Sally's English Blog: Day Five - Worldwide Climate Problem/SolutionSallyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15470610093714015713noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8266474991466818082.post-9449157954234620982007-02-12T22:04:00.000-05:002007-02-12T22:04:00.000-05:00Great Job on this assignment. I enjoyed the fact ...Great Job on this assignment. I enjoyed the fact that you show that you did a lot of research and provided a lot of information. I like how you gave an explanation about the climate change and your views about it before you did the problem solution part. You did a great job giving information and examples and I liked how you gave credit to the people that provided you with the information. I also liked how you were thorough with you Problem and your solution to your problem. Keep up the good work.Tim Rothenberger Eng. 10https://www.blogger.com/profile/03147380475219852663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8266474991466818082.post-19833544829279007952007-02-12T14:59:00.000-05:002007-02-12T14:59:00.000-05:00Dear Sally-the fact that you researched so much an...Dear Sally-<BR/>the fact that you researched so much and had a lot of information is great. the contributing factors and evidence is all relevant. but, the one issue is that your problem really isN't a problem. it relates to global warming obiviously, but you should get specific to what a real, direct problem to humans is. if you can keep asking yourself why your problem is a problem, it isn't. EXAMPLe: WHY are greenhouse gases bad? ->they heat up the planet. so the REAL problem is the heating of the planet. but now, WHY is the heating of the planet bad??? ->there are many reasons it's bad. ecosystems die, the sea levels will rise or flood, etc.etc. . ...THEN< if you ask why THOSE things are bad, you can only say "Because they are." therefore, the problem cannot be asked why it is bad anymore. See what I'm saying? so make your problem more specific so people can make a direct connection in their heads that it is a BAD thing. (greenhouse gases and global warming are too general of problems.)** good job and goodluck! -> mara =)MaraWritesFerFunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07682565743118648632noreply@blogger.com